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Killing is hard,
But loving is harder.
To be fulfilled,
A god and a martyr.

Living a dream,
And dreaming a life,
With feelings to scream,
And seeming alright.

Being what will.
Willing to be.
Nothing to us,
But you’re nothing to me.

We wake up together,
But I’m still alone.
Seeing whatever
That I shall atone.

Breathing so helpless,
Hopelessly needing.
Believing what broke us.
Why am I bleeding?

Not out of sin.
Fore nothing but grief,
Is bringing the end
And killing the meek.

Kneeling for pleasure,
Breaking for hate.
Religion a treasure
When safety’s innate.

Blackened and fallow,
You cry out for me.
But we are too shallow
To know what will be.
©2005-2009 ~PreachIntolerance
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Not a bad little piece...

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:iconkit161:
Wow.

That was really quite powerful, honestly.
I really like this one..

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{+X...you're such an inspiration for the ways...X+}
{+x........that i'll never ever choose to be........x+}
:iconpreachintolerance:
:hug:...

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Music Of The Night

"Close your eyes
For your eyes will only tell the truth
And the truth isn't what you want to see.
In the dark, is it easy to pretend
That the truth is what it ought to be..."
- Phantom Of The Opera (Broadway Original)
:iconmakesmelaugh:
I like the rhyming in it. I agree it is very powerful :D

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:iconyoungshini:
another piece that to me is a masterpiece if only i had ure skill


--Ys

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--Ys
The more I see the less I believe. I the more I hear the less I care. This world we created has left me cold. This world is sedated dying in its sleep. I feel NOTHING.
:iconpreachintolerance:
Why thank you... hehe...

:poke:...

--
Music Of The Night

"Close your eyes
For your eyes will only tell the truth
And the truth isn't what you want to see.
In the dark, is it easy to pretend
That the truth is what it ought to be..."
- Phantom Of The Opera (Broadway Original)
:iconpreachintolerance:
Wow... thank you...

Your comments are always very inspiring... thank you... :-)...

--
Music Of The Night

"Close your eyes
For your eyes will only tell the truth
And the truth isn't what you want to see.
In the dark, is it easy to pretend
That the truth is what it ought to be..."
- Phantom Of The Opera (Broadway Original)
:iconyoungshini:
always ready to contribute praise to those who deserve it

--Ys

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--Ys
The more I see the less I believe. I the more I hear the less I care. This world we created has left me cold. This world is sedated dying in its sleep. I feel NOTHING.

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